| 1 MINUTE READ | an urban unwinding

cities are not a place
for slow rituals
drawn away from
sitting in silence
by the constant shadow
of more important things to do
cities remind us
that the calming act of being
is an unproductive asset
from the sky the city is
a million flickering light bulbs,
an endless subterfuge of plumbing,
the dancing fluidity of gas flames on stoves
these are the hard fought conveniences
that consume our lives
into an elusive pursuit of promises
a blur of unexperienced memories
when we slow down
and keep quiet
the more significant things
are unveiled
about us
and the city
and all the dreams in between
-x-

To understand the world around us, we must look beyond the compelling illusions that fade away – to the enduring truths that remain.
Thought provoking and profound words!
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As Ramana Maharishi used to say “Summa Iru”. Keep quiet.
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The truth that endures, we forget always. Thanks for reminding!!!
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Lovely.. beautifully written
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Sambavami Yuge Yuge……..
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After reading your article, we experience Ananda only. Indeed captivating.
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“… the calming act of being
is an unproductive asset”
Yes… and the conditioning that insists upon and glorifies productivity is a hard pattern to unpick.
Yet silence can do it. What a mercy!
Thank you Ananda.
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Very well worded because city just absorbs us and inner peace is distorted
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Beautifully Expressed
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Yes Anand,
Beautifully captured
So true:_
When we slow down and keep quite
The more significant things are unveiled.
Thanks for reminding us.
We live in this world ,chasing something or the other, but the real meaning of Life ,is so elusive.
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Love the way you use words, and your insights Ananda.
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😊 I am reminded of the “Appala pattu” of Sri Ramana Maharishi. When human collective thought transforms even cities can become spaces of silence.
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Like mad we run after illusions thereby distorting our inner peace.
Anand thanks for this mind provoking message..
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Beautifully written Anand!
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Vry well described in your poem
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The two worlds we continuously live in…
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Beautiful and true.
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Absolutely brilliant – truly enjoyed the poem.
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Simple truth
Yet as long as we live in this body in which our soul resides the journey requires materialistic stuff
HOW MUCH ? Is the question
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Thank you once again for a thought provoking post, “ cities remind us that the calming act of being is an unproductive asset”
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Completely resonates with me. Just loved the simplicity of your expression.
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as always – a delight to read!
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After reading your article, we experience Ananda only. Indeed captivating.
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Anand you and your poetry takes me on an Ananda Ride!! Please continue writing for many like me experience such Ananda intermittently through their mundane lives.
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Beautiful!
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Very nicely penned. Impactful choice of words..
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The current days cities definitely represent & make us synonymous with big chaotic world . To look both inside self & truth is a unbelievable miracle unlikely to be achieved. The whole subject is beautifully described by you Anand . Thanks a lot for sharing your beautiful thoughts with us .
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Anand…You have finally arrived where I expected you to…prose to poetry!!!
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Beautiful!!
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Brilliant piece of writing. Although i don’t understand why you wrote it in the way a poem is written because it’s clearly not a poem tbh. Its rather a paragraph. A paragraph that conveys more meanings than it promises. And to write such stuff is very tough. Incredible!
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Beautiful poem. The silence and the slowing down albeit due to the recent scenarios, did unveil the beauty of the skies and the sound of the chirping birds!
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Worth a ponder 🌼✊👍
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Such a gorgeous post. Thanks.
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The plight of city living… beautifully explained 👌👌
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“…the dancing fluidity of gas flames on stoves”–I like that you can find beauty in the city’s images, even as they can prevent us from slowing down and discovering ourselves.
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I’ve never been much on poetry, yet your posts are so captivating that I can’t help but read more!
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